User talk:Iamroger

I truly need some serious help or guidance. Can someone please review my Raquela article. (The new work space is now located here - https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Iamroger/Raquela&oldid=696162482) Could someone tell me what to change, edit out, etc.?

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Iamroger (talk) 19:34, 21 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, and welcome. The main issue at this point is that the Early career and recent projects is formatted like a cv. You already have a table that lists here work. Combine both these sections into one called career and write it as one continuous paragraph. Once this is done, you may need to do a little work to ensure the language is neutral (rewarded with ->recieved, etc.). Also more sourcing never hurts (although what you have is not at all bad). But definitely the cv aspect is the first issue to tackle. Don't hesitate to ask more questions. Happy Squirrel (talk) 20:21, 21 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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